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No. 3 Fall 2002

Demonstrative Observation: The Deductive Measurement of Production
M.J. Jewell and A.S. Vine

I:  Thesis

                     [edge of an (error] revealed had led to a production)

     axiom:   me, and her face lit up and she waved. Pointing at the exit she

methods:  i             find the variable (using setting circles)
                 ii             find the comparison stars
                 iii            erasure
                 iv            reassemby
II:  Initial Data/Iterative Function

                    August upon examination:
                    took her to the rock at look rock;
                    pointing at the exit, she lit me up;
                    oak and rocks,
                    the second.

                    the exit tract:
                    lines of poplar preceded
                    lines of poplar (production of a parenthesis, a difference wave preceded
                    by the wave
                    and a parenthesis scale.
III: Demonstration

                    and before and before
                    a different woman groped and smoked me down
                    lower on the mountain,
                    still above the valley.
                    taught me constellations
                    an ocean away
                    (by the sea we had been
                    measured around faces, not a survey).

                    ten months per inch
                    thumbnail scale
                    [poplar blossom round a dial]
                    fielding constellations
                    lower on the mountain
                    oak to rock to poplar to oak to exit
   IV: Conclusion

sky sky sky sky sky sky sky
             
sky mountain poplar poplar mountain poplar sky
             
sky mountain mountain valley woman rock mountain
             
valley waved oak rock rock poplar valley
             
sand sand valley tar valley poplar valley
             
sea sea sea sea sand waved valley
             
sea sea sea sea sea sea sand

[end august]

                    the woman was the face
                    led to which
                    we had thought discovered,
                    poplar pointing at

 


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